"You have all recieved youre last warning. I am in the process of currently tracking all of youre ips and pinging your home adressess. you should not have commencemed a war with me" - Aaron Rayburn
Looks ok. Only complaint was a technical glitch - in the scene where the big sea creature thingy is attacking the boat, he pulls his arm back to strike and his elbow passes the clipping plane. Suddenly there is a massive disembodied hand flying toward the boat...oh wait, there's the rest of it.